Sunday, November 14, 2010


Summer sun
Hits my back
Making me lazy

Autumn wind
Hits my face
Waking me up

Winter snow
Hits my soul
Making my heart happy

Spring rains
Hit my feet
As the flowers bloom.


Kathy Haynie said...

I like the line, "Winter snow / hits my soul." I like the structure and rhythm of this poem, too.

Eva Wade said...

I LOVE this poem! You write so well! :-)

JuliaKoponick said...

Sometimes I think the best poems are simple, with lots of layers of meanings....I hope this is one of them. :-)